..... I abused another request lol
This is really awesome, Lulu! The diagonal effects follows the flow well and the c4d surrounding the render is perfect too. The text fits perfectly there too. The only thing which is missing is the light source. Else it'd be (y).
From what I've seen in your works, the effects you create are beautiful enough. If only you added depth and lighting, you just don't know how amazing your works would be.