[quote name='Maria.']Two words for this tag. WRONG DEPTH.
Not exactly wrong but. The FG, MG, and BG looks weird with the blurring.
The blurring of the FG is exactly equal to the BG. What makes the depth more weird is that the focal is quite sharpened that it fails to blend with the blurred parts.
It's pretty yes but I would've preferred that you lessen the highlight on those curvy things. It kills the feel. The typo, well I know it's your own preference to place it there but I would prefer that you didn't place the typo.
/kills the text
Again, the border, I know it's your preference.
/kills the border
Actually, not to be frank, but I don't see any special changes between the stock and the tag. I think you just highlighted the curvy things and the sun(lens flare?), added an orange to red gradient map and blurred instinctively(randomly?).
It would've been more interesting if you could pull of some concept in it rather that just "I want to kill you." We can see the text, but the graphic itself doesn't deliver what the text says.
Things you should fix and add:
-The blurring. I really find it awkward. <_<
-Add a concept. Technique-wise you're good but you lack the concept on your works. You just let the typo speak for the tag. Let the tag speak for itself. ^^
That's all. Hope you learned something from my short CnC(and quite fail? OTL).
-Maria.[/QUOTE]
Hmm, that's something new, about the concept. I'll keep it in mind. As for the blurring, I divided the image into sections (hand, sleeve, Shiki, pillars, buildings on the left, buildings behind) and blurred each section with a different amount of blur. It probably didn't turn out right because I'm still unfamiliar with how a foreground/background should be blurred. I should go find a tutorial on how to have proper depth. Do you have any suggestions?