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The villagers of Draik's travel party awake to see Draik laying dead in a coagulated blood pool surrounding him. Taking time to recover from their daze the villagers begin to select a few strong members of the party to appoint a new leader following favorable skills in their current condition...

And still Sesshomaru is bested by weaker beings.

Yep. I must say thanks now because you just helped me with my sig.

Bored of direction of story and getting frustrated with my other story. Hmm... To skip to the possibly more interesting parts or continue to add a ridiculous amount of filler. What kind of dramatic change could I make? *Thinking* Part 5 could get fun though. Maybe I could take creativity to...

NZ 6.3 Japan 8.9 Japan 8,000x stronger <- news Major damage in Japan was caused by tsunami. Major damgae in NZ was the construction of buildings. The word "sturdy" isn't quite the answer as that is why the buildings in NZ crumbled. "Flexibility" Tokyo buildings for example are built to...

The story is just free write nothing serious at all. This takes very little time maybe a few minutes and little revision if any at all. That is me just being lazy. If I wanted to go all out, then the story would take a lot longer to produce as the editing and maximum thinking of a good...

Part 4 The party leader Draik rounds up the remaining exhausted villagers to begin the next hike to another plateau a few miles up into the smokey white clouds known for freezing temperatures from the vapor in the thin air at the high altitude. Draik makes his way ahead to scout for worn out...

Hello Grammar Nazi, Glad to make your acquaintance. How do you do? Sincerely, Shane/V1RU5/Sigi/Shadow

What you mean? What similarity and what specific post?

Wow thanks, Me being a pessimistic person didn't expect a second comment so nice. I guess answering the question wouldn't ruin the story about to unfold on top of mountain. Well the view is more narrative as of now, but the point of view will shift or reveal whom the point of view is...

Part 3 The small party of villagers took shelter in the massive cave. The cave consisted of a huge tunnel network that had been unexplored for decades to the villagers. The lack of light and terrible weather conditions prevented exploration into the depths of the cave plus the dangers of wild...

Wow this way of writing makes it seem so dull and uneducated. Sadly not worth anyone's time to read. Well, then again it was half fast work to begin with just to get rid of the urge to write. Back to the next section.

Part 2 A few villagers decide to venture toward the dangerous mountain range to the west crossing miles of terrain unsafe as daily predators will hunt down men and leave nothing for the scavengers. The area is defined with a horrible, stale stench in the air caught by the pressure from the wind...

Haha I don't reread my work. I don't even edit my work. Written once and then left and if I care to ever read my work again, then I see all the errors that could have been fixed. So think of that as a first draft that was turned in as a final. Only took me a few seconds to write the...