Necrosis of the Brain

#1
I think I have necrosis of the brain.I fear that I am going insane.I feel my mind derail like a train.I fall as I slip off my cane.I bash my head in again 'n' again.I can't help that I like the pain.I want my blood to drop down like rain.I watch as it flows down the drain.I know my whole life has been your bane.I surely have necrosis of the brain.
 

Tempest

The Lotus Eater
Staff member
#2
I want Eminem to rap this and then remix it, dubstep. As I've told you privately, it has too much rhyming going on for my liking but you could try to vary the rhyming by not using only words that end with -ain/ane sound.