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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Nori @ August 2, 2007, 9:02 PM) [snapback]9900[/snapback]</div>
They all need borders.[/b]
I wanted to do that tho but I forgot lol anyways I putted them...
 

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Looks kinda like brushes. Anyway, aside from that. It's missing flow, I can see it near the stock. But the rest of the render is just randomly there, and doesn't have any contrasting flow to the rest of it. Text is quite a bit out of place. Still don't see a border though

Keep practicing
 

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lol, ur like a teacher all I know is when something looks good and bad, don't know about texture or flow and all that crap,lol I'm still learning
 

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Been doing it for about... 5-6 years now. Just kinda got used to it. Figured I'd give some constructive criticism
 
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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Entombment @ August 8, 2007, 11:45 AM) [snapback]10277[/snapback]</div>
Looks kinda like brushes. Anyway, aside from that. It's missing flow, I can see it near the stock. But the rest of the render is just randomly there, and doesn't have any contrasting flow to the rest of it. Text is quite a bit out of place. Still don't see a border though

Keep practicing[/b]
What do you mean by sayin' it looks like brushes? :blink: lol I didn't get that part..
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Xeph3r @ August 9, 2007, 9:40 AM) [snapback]10375[/snapback]</div>
What do you mean by sayin' it looks like brushes? :blink: lol I didn't get that part..[/b]
Most likely he meant downloaded brushes....